Friday, August 9, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour                                                                                                        Sabour1
Prof. Brown
English 1B
July 28, 2013
Be Honest in Your Delivery
            I want to start with a quote from Saadi, the Persian poet, about humans which is written on the wall of United Nations in New York.
“Human beings are members of a whole,
In creation of one essence and soul.
If one member is afflicted with pain,
Other members uneasy will remain.
If you have no sympathy for human pain,
The name of human you cannot retain.”
Almost all religions believe in our ancestors, Adam and Eve, and the way generations started from them. Despite the varieties of races and ethnicities, there is a very little difference in humans regarding their genes. It means we are all coming from the same genes, roots and background, as Saadi says in his poem. We are part of a whole; a whole body consisting of different parts that are all essential. We are all the most precious creatures. But what happens that some of us forget this and start to harm the others? What happens that we forget where we came from and where we are going? Unfortunately, we humans are improved in any field but we are getting lost and become strangers to ourselves. It is expected that as we grow in each aspect of life, we get closer to each other and become better human beings. But in reality violence has not
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disappeared among us. There might have been violence that we never knew about it, but these days we can record anything. Journalists take the responsibility to record and keep whatever happens, especially regarding violence and wars. But if we want to record our masterpieces, we should show the reality as completely as it has happened. There should be no exception or biased selection to show, and in order to be fair we have to show those who are the causes of violence as well. Everyone should know who are the sources of those violences happened so people can support or reject events. If it is not like this, there will be cases not revealed at all, or some that have been magnified censored or intentionally changed.  
We have seen a lot of pictures and movies about what happened in Vietnam, but no movie has been made to show those who were chemically poisoned in the bombing of Iraq in the war of Iran and Iraq. Have those countries that sold chemical bombs to Iraq, let the journalists reveal any picture of what happened at that time, or make a movie of life of a veteran who is suffering from an unknown disease caused by the bombs. Here we feel how much it is important for media to be honest and not beneficiary from any political group or country.
I believe that even if there are honest journalists and photographers that record such events, countries make a business profit making use of those records. There can be T.V. shows made based on a picture of child in Iraq to simulate people’s emotions towards a special idea. Don’t the T.V shows try to use it to attract more viewers? Do they really care about those people of the third world? What they care is their own benefit.


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DiMaggio, Anthony from University of Illinois, Chicago, has researched about the media covering the war in Iraq from February 2007 through January 2008. He tries to compare the outcome of the media from different countries reporting the same event. There were thirteen countries publishing news about the war. Countries like United States, United Kingdom, Spain, Australia, New Zealand, Israel, Canada, Mexico, Singapore, Hong Kong, Thailand, Pakistan, and South Africa. The funny result of this research is that each country’s critic about it, was strongly influenced by their position in the scenario, some approved and some didn’t. This research shows how countries use media based on their benefits. As DiMaggio says,
“ I examined the war in Iraq as classic case of neoliberal intervention on the part of the U.S. and its allies. A systematic historical review of U.S. policy plans in the Middle East, and the relevance of that planning to the neoliberal occupation, are addressed at length. Those countries located furthest outside of the core of the world capitalist system follow the Iraq was the least consistently, on a month by month basis, but are the strongest in their challenges to the legitimacy of the occupation. Conversely, core countries cover the conflict far more closely, and are more limited in their sympathy to strong criticism of the war.”
Another writer, Jo Groebel, in “The Role of the Mass Media in Modern Wars” states that media and war are like twin brothers that can never be separated. He says that, “Modern wars need the mass media; the mass media need wars. This statement has to be explained. Immediately after the ending of the Gulf War, an Israeli general described televisions as one of the most important means of military strategy. Most governments would have difficulty
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engaging in a war without the support of their people. This support depends on the belief in the necessity if military action that can be obtained through media.” We know that most of the younger generations have no personal experience of war. Their knowledge of war relies on mass media. The media have a primary role in expressing the wars and attracting people’s attentions. It seems good, but media has a critical role in transferring the news honestly.
I believe media is the best tool to show what happens all around the world, but it needs to be honest, and unbiased in transferring the news. But it seems that countries have puppet media and their own shows and theaters. They take their followers’ minds to the directions that they wish. In order to solve this problem and have a reliable and honest news, I suggest having an unbiased, free, and independent society of journalists that belong to no political party or country in order to have the first hand news. Although the first and most important role of media is supposed to be publishing reliable and first hand news, but it is not what really happens. News are changed for many reasons, more of political purposes. Media, as a business, tries to keep its business and increase the benefits. That is why same news will be revealed differently from different media. This biased action is observed in media on publishing violation news as well. I think an unbiased worldwide free media with free independent  journalist, authors, and critic writes can solve this problem and everyone anywhere, can reach the first hand news of any kind. So people can have their own choice to interpret the news and judge. Biased and unreliable media only publishes news for their own benefits, so some events might not be heard at all and some will be changed.
           
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A free media has a good feature which is the first hand news with no biased interpretation to target a goal or a specific group of people. Aung San Suu Kyi who is a Burmese opposition politician and chairperson of the National League for Democracy in Burma in a land mark political  in the 1990 general election, has called for  “completely free, independent and unbiased journalism”. But her speech was censored by election commission when she talked about the lack of freedom to speak and no access to get military information. But she is still encouraging her people to be free from fears. She believes that democracy with no freedom is impossible. She thinks that, “Strict media laws and censorship deprived the people of freedom of speech, freedom to write, freedom to listen and freedom of expression.”
            Throughout the history people have fought and sacrificed their lives to get human rights against those who had taken it from them. But how can we feel we have our basic right to hear and interpret the news while we get the second hand information? We think we are free and have access to the fastest type of information publication, which is internet. But still we do not have access to violation news as it really is. According to The Media Association, in a country like Turkey, internet is censored based on law. “ The Media Association’s Internet committee completed a report in July 2013 on Internet censorship in Turkey that called for amending Law No. 5651, which regulates the Internet, in a manner that would support freedom of thought and expression and in accordance with the Council of Europe‘s Convention on Cybercrime.” In this country some websites are not accessible. How can this country claim to be a democratic country, while being part of Europe?  I think internet should not be controlled or filtered by governments. This is not fair.
            About four years ago in Iran, after the cheating on the presidential election, many people especially younger ones came to streets to fight for their votes. But the government killed most of them and captured those who tried to take photos or videos of what was done to unarmed people. I was a witness of the violence happened at that time but the reality was never reported. The crime done by government’s reaction was so inhumane that they were scared the news be published to the world, while they claim of having a religious based democracy. People in Iran do not have access to a non-filtered internet. YouTube is a dream to be opened. Even personal activities are monitored. If there was a free media to show this cruelty, Iran’s government could not break the human rights of its people. With the excuse of improper things for children and things against Islamic roles, they are having restrictions on everything.
            How do you respond if you see a violation is happening in your neighbor’s house? Do you just shut your door and close your eyes? Or do you show a reaction to help? How can we feel comfortable if our neighbor is having a problem? It might have happened to us. In that case do we expect others to help us?  By having a free and independent media, I believe, rate of violation will get to zero. I think if violators know that everyone will get to know them and will react, will not do any violation.
            Internet as the fastest, easiest and the most accessible toll of media to publish news, is censored even in countries like United States and in Europe. According to Eric Fish, in his article of  “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?” , internet censorship is in conflict with democracy. According to the definition of democracy, internet censorship is not accepted. Recently the Liberal Party in Australia tried to perform internet censorship law, but it was not successful. In Iran, the censorship regime performs this dirty trick in this way. They block domain name servers, and use routers to slow or stop a user’s Internet connection if they try to go to web sites that they do not want public to have access to.
            I tried to find a solution for the problem of violation censorship and media. As free human beings we have the right to have access to the most recent, unbiased, first hand information from all around the world without any media in between to move it to its own benefit direction. If so, there might be people who care about what happens to their own species in other parts of the world and protest for them. This might act as a stop light for violation. If such an independent media existed, those young boys and girls killed by Iran’s terrorist government would be alive now. But there will come a day when no one will accept any biased news, and I wish for a day when there is no violence in the world.





           




                                                  Work cited
1.      Saadi, Shirazi. Biography, Wikipedia
2.      McIntyre, Jeff. “Media Violence in the News: American Psychological Association Public Policy Initiatives. “ SAGE PUBLICATION, INC. 2010-06-08.
3.      Groebel, Jo. “The Role of the Mass Media in Modern Wars.” N.d.web. 2007
4.      Worldpress. March 16. 2012. Web. August 6. 2013.
5.      Today Zaman. “Internet censorship is violation of human rights. August 7. 2013
6.      Fish, Eric. “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?” Asia-Pacific Journal on Human Rights and the Law (2) (2009): n, page. Web. August 6, 2013.











Thursday, August 8, 2013


Soudabeh Sabour

Prof. Brown

English 1B

August 7, 2013

                                                                 Commentary 4

            Continuing the problem of hate crime in the essay of ethical argument, she proposes the solution that is convincing. There are laws that seem to be redundant and can be removed. I liked her statement that these laws are the overuse of the law system. I believe that when the law system is very complicated with lots of details, more crime can happen. I think there is always a better way. She is right that the hate law can be canceled and fairness be applied to all. This will make people be offered their rights protected by government. She is right and the removal of the hate crime law will cause such a feeling. I liked her comparison of a murder under a hate crime, which is a murder anyway. It cannot be an excuse.

            She mentions another consequence of the repeal of hate crime, which is accurate prosecution of cases. I was convinced by her proposal essay that the hate crime legislations need to be repealed. It might have worked before, but not anymore with the civil rights of people. She makes a good use of outside sources to support her proposal idea. Each paragraph contains a good reason of removing the hate crime law. And all are supporting her thesis statement.

            She brought about a good ethical problem and gave a good solution for it. I as a reader who does not know about the law in United States, would rather see some examples of hate crime laws and the unfairness of it. Some real cases would make me connect more to the topic. It is very technical topic for a reader like me, with some words that I needed to look up their meanings. I did not know what the first amendment is. As a whole, the proposed solution was convincing and I got the message of the article.

Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour
Prof. Brown
English 1B
August 5, 2013
                                                Independent Media
            Have you ever heard some news about a school mate that later you found out it was  wrong or intentionally made up or exaggerated? Do you prefer to hear news as it is or do you like to get the second or third hand news decorated in a story maker’s mind? This bad habit among people has more psychological roots which are out of our topic, but in a bigger scale it can be found among the journalist and media. Although the first and most important role of media is supposed to be publishing reliable and first hand news, but it is not what really happens. News are changed for many reasons, more of political purposes. Media, as a business, tries to keep its business and increase the benefits. That is why same news will be revealed differently from different media. This biased action is observed in media on publishing violation news as well. I think an unbiased worldwide free media with free independent  journalist, authors, and critic writes can solve this problem and everyone anywhere, can reach the first hand news of any kind. So people can have their own choice to interpret the news and judge.
            A free media has a good feature which is the first hand news with no biased interpretation to target a goal or a specific group of people. Aung San Suu Kyi who is a Burmese opposition politician and chairperson of the National League for Democracy in Burma in a land mark political  in the 1990 general election, has called for  “completely free, independent and unbiased journalism”. But her speech was censored by election commission when she talked about the lack of freedom to speak and no access to get military information. But she is still encouraging her people to be free from fears. She believes that democracy with no freedom is impossible. She thinks that, “Strict media laws and censorship deprived the people of freedom of speech, freedom to write, freedom to listen and freedom of expression.”
            Throughout the history people have fought and sacrificed their lives to get human rights against those who had taken it from them. But how can we feel we have our basic right to hear and interpret the news while we get the second hand information? We think we are free and have access to the fastest type of information publication, which is internet. But still we do not have access to violation news as it really is. According to The Media Association, in a country like Turkey, internet is censored based on law.        “ The Media Association’s Internet committee completed a report in July 2013 on Internet censorship in Turkey that called for amending Law No. 5651, which regulates the Internet, in a manner that would support freedom of thought and expression and in accordance with the Council of Europe‘s Convention on Cybercrime.” In this country some websites are not accessible. How can this country claim to be a democratic country, while being part of Europe?  I think internet should not be controlled or filtered by governments. This is not fair.
            About four years ago in Iran, after the cheating on the presidential election, many people especially younger ones came to streets to fight for their votes. But the government killed most of them and captured those who tried to take photos or videos of what was done to unarmed people. I was a witness of the violence happened at that time but the reality was never reported. The crime done by government’s reaction was so inhumane that they were scared the news be published to the world, while they claim of having a religious based democracy. People in Iran do not have access to a non-filtered internet. YouTube is a dream to be opened. Even personal activities are monitored. If there was a free media to show this cruelty, Iran’s government could not break the human rights of its people. With the excuse of improper things for children and things against Islamic roles, they are having restrictions on everything.
            How do you respond if you see a violation is happening in your neighbor’s house? Do you just shut your door and close your eyes? Or do you show a reaction to help? How can we feel comfortable if our neighbor is having a problem? It might have happened to us. In that case do we expect others to help us?  By having a free and independent media, I believe, rate of violation will get to zero. I think if violators know that everyone will get to know them and will react, will not do any violation.
            Internet as the fastest, easiest and the most accessible toll of media to publish news, is censored even in countries like United States and in Europe. According to Eric Fish, in his article of  “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?” , internet censorship is in conflict with democracy. According to the definition of democrecy, internet censorship is not accepted. Recently the Liberal Party in Australia tried to perform internet censorship law, but it was not seccesful. In Iran, the censorship regime performs this dirty trick in this way. They block domain name servers, and use  routers to slow or stop a user’s Internet connection if they try to go to web sites that they do not want public to have access to.
            In this proposal essay I tried to find a solution for the problem of violation censorship and media. As free human beings we have the right to have access to the most recent, unbiased, first hand information from all around the world without any media in between to move it to its own benefit direction. If so, there might be people who care about what happens to their own species in other parts of the world and protest for them. This might act as a stop light for violation. If such an independent media existed, those young boys and girls killed by Iran’s terrorist government would be alive now.




                                                              Work cited

1.      Worldpress. March 16. 2012. Web. August 6. 2013.
2.      Today Zaman. “Internet censorship is violation of human rights. August 7. 2013
3.      Fish, Eric. “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?Asia-Pacific Journal on Human Rights and the Law (2) (2009): n, page. Web. August 6, 2013.



Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour       
Prof. Brown
English 1 B
July 31, 2013
                                                    Commentary number three
          Rachel has written about the problem of bias-motivated violence and/or efforts to combat this problem through “hate crime” legislation. Her thesis statement is “while it is true that crime motivated by prejudice is a moral tragedy against humanity, hate crime legislation is ethically wrong because it flaws the judicial system and throws off the balance of equality. Her introductory paragraph is quite attracting attention of the reader. I liked her title as well. It is catchy. She states that she is not accepting crime motivated by prejudice and the consequence is flaw of judicial system and imbalance in equality. So she has considered the principle and the consequences at the same time. The criteria she talks about is that although laws are meant to deter hateful behavior, but are they really doing that and fixing the problem? Her criteria arguments provide compelling support for her theses. And everything she uses to convince the readers are relevant to her thesis.
In the first paragraph she says that hate crime legislation is distorting U.S. law system. Because the judicial system is based on evidences that can be proven, while finding out whether a crime happened out of motives depends on the criminal’s character and is not easy to be judged. She uses an article called “hate crime” from A Critical Perspective to support her thesis. She thinks it is not easy to find out what a person thinks in order to judge him/her. In this paragraph she focuses on the difficulty of the judgment of a hate crime and how it imbalances the right of equality.

            In the next paragraph she states the effect of hate crime legislation on people of different ethnicity and how this will affect human equality. She quotes an article to support it. She thinks that this law will take the U.S claim of having equality protection under the law, under a big question mark. The flaw of this would be inequality between some people who are more protected than others. I believe she has been successful to make a skeptical mind accept her criteria. And I did not find any area that I as a reader can challenge. And finally she sums up in the final paragraph a summary about the whole essay to convince the reader about her idea.

Friday, July 26, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour
Prof. Brown
English 1B
July 26, 2013
           
                                                              A Discussion that Never Ends
As a child grown up with kittens, I would never think of taking a poor animal’s body apart, especially a cat. I love animals of any kind, but when in my anatomy class I did skin the poor kitty and dissected him, I found out how much it is important to use animals to improve medical field.
I know it might seem evil, but I think life is not romantic as we may expect. It is totally wrong if one thinks that no one should ever suffer in life. It is the nature of life that those who are more powerful will exist and the rest will be gone. Life is a mixture of pain and joy. We just have to try to make it more joyful. We cannot delete pain from our lives. so we have tried to reduce the pain suffering throughout the history. It is a matter of benefit and cost. If we stand the pain of dentistry, it is because we want to avoid a more severe pain later. So it is for a good reason.
            I do not agree with the Christian idea that animals have no soul. They might not have as developed motor nervous system to feel pain as we do, but everything in nature in my opinion has a soul. I also don’t like we humans are more worth than many sparrows. I accept humans are the most powerful animal but not more worth. It is our power and need to survive to take advantage of other species.

            It is a very unfair beneficial interpretation of the soul of animals among some people. This is only playing with words to justify what people do. There are always people to criticize others. 

Friday, July 19, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour
Prof. Brown
English 1B
July 19, 2013
                       
what was he trying to tell us about the Empire?
why he did not follow his own will and let the animal go?
was what he did the only way he could act?

                                                        “Shooting an Elephant” 
                                                          " by George Orwell"
Eric Arthur Blair, known as George Orwell, was born in an English family in India. He worked in police department in Burma when he was young. His life in India caused him to have a special look at poverty in his books. In the story of shooting an elephant, which is a real story of him, he described the totally different life still of the natives and their hatred towards the British people. In this story he killed an elephant unwillingly. As a symbol of the British Empire among the Indians, he tried to show his power, while he felt so miserable inside. In his story he tried to use the killing of an elephant as a symbol of a bad decision made by him as a representative of the Empire.
            He directly expressed his hatred towards the imperialism as he said, “imperialism is an evil thing”. He was forced to do his job, while he was with Burmese and against the British. Working in India let him see the real “dirty” work of Empire from near. But he had no choice. He was young and not well educated and had to no other choice, which gave him a feeling of guilt too. He was between his inside hatred of the Empire and the hatred of the people he was living with. He did not know that the Empire of British is fading and dying.
            One day something “tiny” happens that made a big issue for him. There was a crazy elephant that had killed one Indian and he had to decide what to do. Against his interest he finally had to kill the poor animal. As he said, “Empire did not want to act like that, but they had to”. I think by this statement he wanted to say that when empire started, they did not want to be so tyranny, but it became the nature of it and they had to keep their power at any cost, since there was no way back. He was forced by the people’s eyes to go forward and kill the poor animal. As he said, “, the futility of the white man's dominion in the East.” he felt so helpless, but no other way to finish it in order to keep the empire’s integrity. Because as he said, “. A white man mustn't be frightened in front of natives and so, in general, he isn't frightened.” That had been the real nature of empire, an empty box. Against his will he finally shut the animal just to show he is not foolish.

Thursday, July 18, 2013


Soudabeh SabourPrpf. C. BrownEnglish 1BJuly 18, 2013

“Commentary on Rachel Tapper’s Rhetorical Argument”
                                           “It is definitely broken but I am not fixing it”

            Rachel has written a rhetorical argument on Christopher Hitchens’ article of “Believe me, It is torture.”  Her argument starts with a title that conveys her idea that Hitchens has brought about a problem but he did not end up with any solution. Actually I like this types of articles that the writer gives the readers the chance to think and decide at the end, and does not try to dictate his own idea to be accepted, so the article is not one sides. I think this style has more effect, since it makes me, as a reader to think, and does not discourage me from reading it all if I see a dictation tone.

            Rachel believes that Hitchens has been successful in his article on “ waterboarding”. This can be understood in her thesis statement when she states that he has used different types of argument appeals under various strategies to convince her, and she has found and mentioned separately those strategies.

            Her paragraphs start with  a good topic sentence that leads to the rest of the paragraph in the same direction clarifying one strategy of the rhetorical argument. For example, in her second paragraph she named the two ways of Logos being used, unspoken assumption and use of evidence. She believes that unspoken assumption is his idea that “ Waterboarding” is a torture and he rejects it, but he did not directly mention this in his article. He also used evidence and testimony by spending time with the real victims and those who have seen and experienced it like Nance. She brings a quote from him about the evening he spend with Nance that proves her claim.

            She goes on by mentioning the strategies of ethos in Hitchens’ article. She thinks that his experience in Waterboarding is a strong ethos by making him a first-hand experienced, rather than someone who sits behind a desk and writes critics about something.  Individually she mentioned successful examples of ethos he used, like knowledge, fairness and his ability to connect with the readers. Although he thinks it is barbarian to do Waterboarding, but at the same time he shows his respect to veterans and those that sacrifices their lives for us to be safe.

            She supports her claim all throughout her essay that Hitchens has been successful in his rhetorical argument on Waterboaring as a torture and mentions the best use of different strategies he has used to achieve his claim.