Friday, August 9, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour                                                                                                        Sabour1
Prof. Brown
English 1B
July 28, 2013
Be Honest in Your Delivery
            I want to start with a quote from Saadi, the Persian poet, about humans which is written on the wall of United Nations in New York.
“Human beings are members of a whole,
In creation of one essence and soul.
If one member is afflicted with pain,
Other members uneasy will remain.
If you have no sympathy for human pain,
The name of human you cannot retain.”
Almost all religions believe in our ancestors, Adam and Eve, and the way generations started from them. Despite the varieties of races and ethnicities, there is a very little difference in humans regarding their genes. It means we are all coming from the same genes, roots and background, as Saadi says in his poem. We are part of a whole; a whole body consisting of different parts that are all essential. We are all the most precious creatures. But what happens that some of us forget this and start to harm the others? What happens that we forget where we came from and where we are going? Unfortunately, we humans are improved in any field but we are getting lost and become strangers to ourselves. It is expected that as we grow in each aspect of life, we get closer to each other and become better human beings. But in reality violence has not
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disappeared among us. There might have been violence that we never knew about it, but these days we can record anything. Journalists take the responsibility to record and keep whatever happens, especially regarding violence and wars. But if we want to record our masterpieces, we should show the reality as completely as it has happened. There should be no exception or biased selection to show, and in order to be fair we have to show those who are the causes of violence as well. Everyone should know who are the sources of those violences happened so people can support or reject events. If it is not like this, there will be cases not revealed at all, or some that have been magnified censored or intentionally changed.  
We have seen a lot of pictures and movies about what happened in Vietnam, but no movie has been made to show those who were chemically poisoned in the bombing of Iraq in the war of Iran and Iraq. Have those countries that sold chemical bombs to Iraq, let the journalists reveal any picture of what happened at that time, or make a movie of life of a veteran who is suffering from an unknown disease caused by the bombs. Here we feel how much it is important for media to be honest and not beneficiary from any political group or country.
I believe that even if there are honest journalists and photographers that record such events, countries make a business profit making use of those records. There can be T.V. shows made based on a picture of child in Iraq to simulate people’s emotions towards a special idea. Don’t the T.V shows try to use it to attract more viewers? Do they really care about those people of the third world? What they care is their own benefit.


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DiMaggio, Anthony from University of Illinois, Chicago, has researched about the media covering the war in Iraq from February 2007 through January 2008. He tries to compare the outcome of the media from different countries reporting the same event. There were thirteen countries publishing news about the war. Countries like United States, United Kingdom, Spain, Australia, New Zealand, Israel, Canada, Mexico, Singapore, Hong Kong, Thailand, Pakistan, and South Africa. The funny result of this research is that each country’s critic about it, was strongly influenced by their position in the scenario, some approved and some didn’t. This research shows how countries use media based on their benefits. As DiMaggio says,
“ I examined the war in Iraq as classic case of neoliberal intervention on the part of the U.S. and its allies. A systematic historical review of U.S. policy plans in the Middle East, and the relevance of that planning to the neoliberal occupation, are addressed at length. Those countries located furthest outside of the core of the world capitalist system follow the Iraq was the least consistently, on a month by month basis, but are the strongest in their challenges to the legitimacy of the occupation. Conversely, core countries cover the conflict far more closely, and are more limited in their sympathy to strong criticism of the war.”
Another writer, Jo Groebel, in “The Role of the Mass Media in Modern Wars” states that media and war are like twin brothers that can never be separated. He says that, “Modern wars need the mass media; the mass media need wars. This statement has to be explained. Immediately after the ending of the Gulf War, an Israeli general described televisions as one of the most important means of military strategy. Most governments would have difficulty
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engaging in a war without the support of their people. This support depends on the belief in the necessity if military action that can be obtained through media.” We know that most of the younger generations have no personal experience of war. Their knowledge of war relies on mass media. The media have a primary role in expressing the wars and attracting people’s attentions. It seems good, but media has a critical role in transferring the news honestly.
I believe media is the best tool to show what happens all around the world, but it needs to be honest, and unbiased in transferring the news. But it seems that countries have puppet media and their own shows and theaters. They take their followers’ minds to the directions that they wish. In order to solve this problem and have a reliable and honest news, I suggest having an unbiased, free, and independent society of journalists that belong to no political party or country in order to have the first hand news. Although the first and most important role of media is supposed to be publishing reliable and first hand news, but it is not what really happens. News are changed for many reasons, more of political purposes. Media, as a business, tries to keep its business and increase the benefits. That is why same news will be revealed differently from different media. This biased action is observed in media on publishing violation news as well. I think an unbiased worldwide free media with free independent  journalist, authors, and critic writes can solve this problem and everyone anywhere, can reach the first hand news of any kind. So people can have their own choice to interpret the news and judge. Biased and unreliable media only publishes news for their own benefits, so some events might not be heard at all and some will be changed.
           
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A free media has a good feature which is the first hand news with no biased interpretation to target a goal or a specific group of people. Aung San Suu Kyi who is a Burmese opposition politician and chairperson of the National League for Democracy in Burma in a land mark political  in the 1990 general election, has called for  “completely free, independent and unbiased journalism”. But her speech was censored by election commission when she talked about the lack of freedom to speak and no access to get military information. But she is still encouraging her people to be free from fears. She believes that democracy with no freedom is impossible. She thinks that, “Strict media laws and censorship deprived the people of freedom of speech, freedom to write, freedom to listen and freedom of expression.”
            Throughout the history people have fought and sacrificed their lives to get human rights against those who had taken it from them. But how can we feel we have our basic right to hear and interpret the news while we get the second hand information? We think we are free and have access to the fastest type of information publication, which is internet. But still we do not have access to violation news as it really is. According to The Media Association, in a country like Turkey, internet is censored based on law. “ The Media Association’s Internet committee completed a report in July 2013 on Internet censorship in Turkey that called for amending Law No. 5651, which regulates the Internet, in a manner that would support freedom of thought and expression and in accordance with the Council of Europe‘s Convention on Cybercrime.” In this country some websites are not accessible. How can this country claim to be a democratic country, while being part of Europe?  I think internet should not be controlled or filtered by governments. This is not fair.
            About four years ago in Iran, after the cheating on the presidential election, many people especially younger ones came to streets to fight for their votes. But the government killed most of them and captured those who tried to take photos or videos of what was done to unarmed people. I was a witness of the violence happened at that time but the reality was never reported. The crime done by government’s reaction was so inhumane that they were scared the news be published to the world, while they claim of having a religious based democracy. People in Iran do not have access to a non-filtered internet. YouTube is a dream to be opened. Even personal activities are monitored. If there was a free media to show this cruelty, Iran’s government could not break the human rights of its people. With the excuse of improper things for children and things against Islamic roles, they are having restrictions on everything.
            How do you respond if you see a violation is happening in your neighbor’s house? Do you just shut your door and close your eyes? Or do you show a reaction to help? How can we feel comfortable if our neighbor is having a problem? It might have happened to us. In that case do we expect others to help us?  By having a free and independent media, I believe, rate of violation will get to zero. I think if violators know that everyone will get to know them and will react, will not do any violation.
            Internet as the fastest, easiest and the most accessible toll of media to publish news, is censored even in countries like United States and in Europe. According to Eric Fish, in his article of  “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?” , internet censorship is in conflict with democracy. According to the definition of democracy, internet censorship is not accepted. Recently the Liberal Party in Australia tried to perform internet censorship law, but it was not successful. In Iran, the censorship regime performs this dirty trick in this way. They block domain name servers, and use routers to slow or stop a user’s Internet connection if they try to go to web sites that they do not want public to have access to.
            I tried to find a solution for the problem of violation censorship and media. As free human beings we have the right to have access to the most recent, unbiased, first hand information from all around the world without any media in between to move it to its own benefit direction. If so, there might be people who care about what happens to their own species in other parts of the world and protest for them. This might act as a stop light for violation. If such an independent media existed, those young boys and girls killed by Iran’s terrorist government would be alive now. But there will come a day when no one will accept any biased news, and I wish for a day when there is no violence in the world.





           




                                                  Work cited
1.      Saadi, Shirazi. Biography, Wikipedia
2.      McIntyre, Jeff. “Media Violence in the News: American Psychological Association Public Policy Initiatives. “ SAGE PUBLICATION, INC. 2010-06-08.
3.      Groebel, Jo. “The Role of the Mass Media in Modern Wars.” N.d.web. 2007
4.      Worldpress. March 16. 2012. Web. August 6. 2013.
5.      Today Zaman. “Internet censorship is violation of human rights. August 7. 2013
6.      Fish, Eric. “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?” Asia-Pacific Journal on Human Rights and the Law (2) (2009): n, page. Web. August 6, 2013.











Thursday, August 8, 2013


Soudabeh Sabour

Prof. Brown

English 1B

August 7, 2013

                                                                 Commentary 4

            Continuing the problem of hate crime in the essay of ethical argument, she proposes the solution that is convincing. There are laws that seem to be redundant and can be removed. I liked her statement that these laws are the overuse of the law system. I believe that when the law system is very complicated with lots of details, more crime can happen. I think there is always a better way. She is right that the hate law can be canceled and fairness be applied to all. This will make people be offered their rights protected by government. She is right and the removal of the hate crime law will cause such a feeling. I liked her comparison of a murder under a hate crime, which is a murder anyway. It cannot be an excuse.

            She mentions another consequence of the repeal of hate crime, which is accurate prosecution of cases. I was convinced by her proposal essay that the hate crime legislations need to be repealed. It might have worked before, but not anymore with the civil rights of people. She makes a good use of outside sources to support her proposal idea. Each paragraph contains a good reason of removing the hate crime law. And all are supporting her thesis statement.

            She brought about a good ethical problem and gave a good solution for it. I as a reader who does not know about the law in United States, would rather see some examples of hate crime laws and the unfairness of it. Some real cases would make me connect more to the topic. It is very technical topic for a reader like me, with some words that I needed to look up their meanings. I did not know what the first amendment is. As a whole, the proposed solution was convincing and I got the message of the article.

Wednesday, August 7, 2013

Soudabeh Sabour
Prof. Brown
English 1B
August 5, 2013
                                                Independent Media
            Have you ever heard some news about a school mate that later you found out it was  wrong or intentionally made up or exaggerated? Do you prefer to hear news as it is or do you like to get the second or third hand news decorated in a story maker’s mind? This bad habit among people has more psychological roots which are out of our topic, but in a bigger scale it can be found among the journalist and media. Although the first and most important role of media is supposed to be publishing reliable and first hand news, but it is not what really happens. News are changed for many reasons, more of political purposes. Media, as a business, tries to keep its business and increase the benefits. That is why same news will be revealed differently from different media. This biased action is observed in media on publishing violation news as well. I think an unbiased worldwide free media with free independent  journalist, authors, and critic writes can solve this problem and everyone anywhere, can reach the first hand news of any kind. So people can have their own choice to interpret the news and judge.
            A free media has a good feature which is the first hand news with no biased interpretation to target a goal or a specific group of people. Aung San Suu Kyi who is a Burmese opposition politician and chairperson of the National League for Democracy in Burma in a land mark political  in the 1990 general election, has called for  “completely free, independent and unbiased journalism”. But her speech was censored by election commission when she talked about the lack of freedom to speak and no access to get military information. But she is still encouraging her people to be free from fears. She believes that democracy with no freedom is impossible. She thinks that, “Strict media laws and censorship deprived the people of freedom of speech, freedom to write, freedom to listen and freedom of expression.”
            Throughout the history people have fought and sacrificed their lives to get human rights against those who had taken it from them. But how can we feel we have our basic right to hear and interpret the news while we get the second hand information? We think we are free and have access to the fastest type of information publication, which is internet. But still we do not have access to violation news as it really is. According to The Media Association, in a country like Turkey, internet is censored based on law.        “ The Media Association’s Internet committee completed a report in July 2013 on Internet censorship in Turkey that called for amending Law No. 5651, which regulates the Internet, in a manner that would support freedom of thought and expression and in accordance with the Council of Europe‘s Convention on Cybercrime.” In this country some websites are not accessible. How can this country claim to be a democratic country, while being part of Europe?  I think internet should not be controlled or filtered by governments. This is not fair.
            About four years ago in Iran, after the cheating on the presidential election, many people especially younger ones came to streets to fight for their votes. But the government killed most of them and captured those who tried to take photos or videos of what was done to unarmed people. I was a witness of the violence happened at that time but the reality was never reported. The crime done by government’s reaction was so inhumane that they were scared the news be published to the world, while they claim of having a religious based democracy. People in Iran do not have access to a non-filtered internet. YouTube is a dream to be opened. Even personal activities are monitored. If there was a free media to show this cruelty, Iran’s government could not break the human rights of its people. With the excuse of improper things for children and things against Islamic roles, they are having restrictions on everything.
            How do you respond if you see a violation is happening in your neighbor’s house? Do you just shut your door and close your eyes? Or do you show a reaction to help? How can we feel comfortable if our neighbor is having a problem? It might have happened to us. In that case do we expect others to help us?  By having a free and independent media, I believe, rate of violation will get to zero. I think if violators know that everyone will get to know them and will react, will not do any violation.
            Internet as the fastest, easiest and the most accessible toll of media to publish news, is censored even in countries like United States and in Europe. According to Eric Fish, in his article of  “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?” , internet censorship is in conflict with democracy. According to the definition of democrecy, internet censorship is not accepted. Recently the Liberal Party in Australia tried to perform internet censorship law, but it was not seccesful. In Iran, the censorship regime performs this dirty trick in this way. They block domain name servers, and use  routers to slow or stop a user’s Internet connection if they try to go to web sites that they do not want public to have access to.
            In this proposal essay I tried to find a solution for the problem of violation censorship and media. As free human beings we have the right to have access to the most recent, unbiased, first hand information from all around the world without any media in between to move it to its own benefit direction. If so, there might be people who care about what happens to their own species in other parts of the world and protest for them. This might act as a stop light for violation. If such an independent media existed, those young boys and girls killed by Iran’s terrorist government would be alive now.




                                                              Work cited

1.      Worldpress. March 16. 2012. Web. August 6. 2013.
2.      Today Zaman. “Internet censorship is violation of human rights. August 7. 2013
3.      Fish, Eric. “Is Internet Censorship Compatible with Democracy?Asia-Pacific Journal on Human Rights and the Law (2) (2009): n, page. Web. August 6, 2013.